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2013年2月2日雅思大作文真题TASK2

发布时间:2013-05-20 22:25浏览次数:821
要求:

Some people think it's all bad for children to watch TV, others believe watching TV can bring positive effects on children when they grow up, discuss both and give your own opinion. 

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参考过去出现的相关题目可以帮助同学们更好地解题:
2008.01.10 TV/ video/ computer games: Good or bad
2008.05.10 Children watch tv: at home VS school
2009.05.16 Imagination and language skills: Read books Vs watch TV
2013.01.05 2009.05.16
2010.03.27 children more Tv, less activities, why? measures?
2010.09.25 Too much TV for children, How affect? What measures?
2010.11.04 Parents read for children Vs free choice on TV/internet/books
2007.12.15 Disasters & violence on TV: why, effects?
2007.11.17 Ads aimed at children should be banned?
第一段:看电视是孩子们很重要的课余活动,有些孩子甚至对电视成瘾
第二段:看电视太多的消极面
1对身体健康不利
2 减少和同龄人以及家人的互动与交流
3 对智力发展不利
4 有些电视内容不适合小孩子
第三段:适量有选择的看电视有益儿童发展
1 增加知识,和探索世界的兴趣
2 丰富课余生活
3 和父母或同龄人一起看有助于更好的亲子或朋友互动
第四段:适量地选择适合孩子的电视节目,并且尽量和父母或同龄人一同看电视有助于孩子的健康发展,否则电视将对孩子产生消极影响。
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some people think it's all bad for children to watch TV,others believe watching TV can bring positive effects on children when they grow up,to my knowledge coins have two sides ,so everything has its advantages and disadvantages ,the most important thing is to distinguwish them and use the good ones. To our topic about watching TV the first thing we should acknowledge is that it's impossible to forbide children from watching TV ,because they can see them everywhere and it's not necessory to do that . The second one is TV shows can provide varierity information to the audience ,it's a good way for children to learn rich knowledge those they can't learn from schools and families .So TV can provide a whole different world to them and to rich their resources to open their minds. Although there are so many advantages about watching TV but there are some problems we should pay attention to, for example there are lots of different TV shows some of them are not prepared for children ,so it's important for the adults to select them for their children ,and too much TV can harm eyes so it's very important to control the time strictly.

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