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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:38浏览次数:11299
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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At the 21 cuenty ,we all have phone . the phone is really imporatant in monden life ,it not only can call message but also can pay money,even when we take a bus train .but the phone is our whole world? as a student ,i have seen many my classmate use phone to play games or chatting,it waste most of their time ,accord to their test failed.in their world them think the phone is the only thing can make them happy.overusing the phone make them didnot study and is also do bad their healthy.even some peoper use phone when they cross the road drveing the car.and always car crack even died. so we should have to know,we cannot become a phone slarey .we should have some intertse sport like football.so give up your phone , what you getting is the whole word.

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