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【题目要求】
100 years ago, human race believed we would make continue progress in all areas of life. Today, some people feel less certain about this. what areas of progress human race has made? What else areas we haven't developed?
【点评一】
本题是2009年5月21日的话题，属于抽象类话题。抽象类话题看似难写，实际上只要转换成具体话题就容易手了。进步的领域：科技，教育。仍需改进的领域：环保，犯罪，人口老龄化，动物保护，文化语言保护。本题几乎无所不包，雅思写作题库中几乎所有话题都能用于本题。
【点评二】
题目 Some people think the human race has made continual progress in all areas of life, while others believe that there is less certainty about this. What areas of progress human race has made? What else areas we have not developed?
一些人认为人类在各方面已经取得了不断的进步，而另外一些人认为并非如此。人类在哪些领域取得了进步？哪些领域没有取得发展？
开头段 How to make a better life never fails to capture people’s attention throughout much of the human history ,which serves as a catalyst for the continuing development in every aspect of life. Some people, however, believe that the so called “development” cannot be regarded as real progress.
中间段1 回答第一问：人类在哪些领域取得了进步？ 1. 众所周知，几个世纪以来，人类一直致力于通过发展科技来改善生存环境。
It is commonly believed that human beings have been striking for improving living conditions by evolving science and technology for many centuries.
【论证示范】
Due to the convenient transportation system, citizens in China are able to enjoy fresh American lemons which were once not available to Chinese or people in many other counties. Communication modes mainly relied on writing letters in the past also witnessed a significantly transformation with the advent of internet, making friends or families enable to contact each other instantly by their computers or tablets.2.其次，与过去相比，人类在医学领域取得了许多突破。
Furthermore, compared with the past , there are many breakthroughs having been achieved in medical care.
中间段2 回答第二问：哪些领域没有取得发展？ 1. 污染，全球变暖，物种灭绝等环境问题已经成为很多国家头痛的问题，它们经常会陷于经济发展和生态平衡的困境中。
Environmental problems in terms of pollutions, global warming ,species extinction and so forth, have been a great headache to most nations who always trap into a dilemma between economic development and ecological balance. 2.各个种族和宗教间的武装冲突是一个持续性的问题，这对世界的和平与和谐造成了威胁。
Arm conflict among various races and religions is another endless problem posing a large threat to world peace and harmony.
结尾段 To sum up, although a lack of knowledge concerning how to control human desire seems to be a big handicap to human civilization, it should be admitted that we have made a great progress in many fields , and the advancement is expected to continue.
world is developing fast, and our life is continuing changing in both positve and nagative sides. through technology development, life become easier comparsing to 100years ago. for example. ways of transportation are almost changed completly. 100years ago, we travel by carrige mostly, and there were few trains and cars. but at present, we depend on cars and planes to move around the country or overseas. also health care technology is developing faster, which make our life longer and healther. some diseases that cannot cure are out of problems nowadays. most importantly i believe is the education we receive is shaped totally differently. years before, only a little proportion of people could learn at school, and they learnt the living skills at workplace not at schools like today. for now, everyone have the right to get basic education, and there are varieties of schools teach us almost any kinds of knowledge. however, there are plenty problems caused by development. firstly, the most headache we suffered is the environmental problem. in order to develop, we need to produce lots of production which caused pollutions which we were not awared of in the past, having lead to many diseases and global warming and so forth. secondly, races and nationist problem have never been solved. races conflict and nationalist's nuclear test are common in the world which threaten world peace. and also the technology of cummunication caused some social problems. we are not like years before to get together talking, we just text or send a message thourgh apps, which may cause many mental diseases. to sum up, although there are problems of how to control desire and to be ecological balance, it should be admitted we have made a great progress in many fields. i believe our life will continue to be greater and problems will be conquer sooner.
