2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；作者句法基础不错，可适当增加复杂句的使用；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

Nowadays,more and more people long to succeed and most of them do have excellent talents but few of them can achieve their ambitions.What they lack is nothing but a strong will ,only the strong will can lead us to fulfill our dreams. In our society,it is very common to find that all the failures have their reasons to explain why they are losers and why they reject to try to achieve their goal again.Finally you will find that what the failure needs is a strong will,not money,not opportunity or something else.When you set a great goal what you need is just a strong will.Nobody can achieve anything without a strong will. As students,we should know that we can not do anything without hard working.In the future,we will be a great man if we work hard everyday from now on.