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2015年高考作文优秀范文:登山活动

发布时间:2015-09-30 16:35浏览次数:2379
要求:
  星光中学(Xing Guang High School)近期举行了一次登山活动。假定你是学校英语报记者,请写一篇短文,报道此次活动。内容包括:
  1. 时间与地点:4月10日,大青山(Daqing Mountain);
  2. 活动的过程;
  3. 你对于这次活动的评论。
  注意: 1. 词数120左右。
  2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Xing Guang High School organized a school activity of mountain climbing on April 10th. We were required to gather at the school gate at 7 am. After half an hour's bus ride we got to the foot of Daqing Mountain. The headmaster emphasized a few notes on security during the climbing. At the whistle of starting, we ran off towards the mountain at once. The path was a little narrow and steep, but those who tried to pass others were all carefuly not to knock them down, for security and friendship not championship were the most important in everyone's heart. Breeze spread the fragrance from wild flowers around, which made us soothed and relaxed. Butterflies inspired us while the idea to stop climbing occured to us. At noon, all of us arrived at the top of the mountain.

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