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2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:37浏览次数:9557
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题目 My views on Online Shopping
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1. 现在网购已经成为一种时尚  
2. 网上购物有很多好处,但也有不少问题 
3. 我的建议 
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Online shoping is very popular in the society nowadays. A lot of people are willing to go shopping online. Many vendors make a special day to attract customers to buy what they want. There are some benefits for online shoping. Firstly, it is very convenient for customers. customers can take less time to go shopping. they can stay at home to choose their items instead of going outside. so online shopping is a time-saving. Secondly, you can find a rare item quickly via internet. if you want to buy a item that hardly is used, it is very difficult for you to find it in supermarket. Thirdly, if you get a thing online, you can make the vendor send it to your desination or people derectly. However, there some rish issues for oneline shopping. For one thing, it is difficult for you to pick up a clothes that are suitable for you in size and color. For another, there is fanacial risk when you pay for your items online. some lawbreakers take this chance to commit financial crime. In a word, one thing has two cro and cis. I shoud keep a safe awareness for online shopping. In addition, the government should make relevant regulations to manage online shopping.

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