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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:38浏览次数:11299
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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Excessively used mobile phone Follow the technology develop,People use thire cell phones becoming more and more.As we all know, the first thing people they look at in the morning and the last thing at night is their phones. Excessivey used moblies phones have some affects. First of all, they will spent thire time on their phones.For example, people are crossing the street still looking at their cell phones that possible make accident. Besides, over-used mobile phones will lost friendship and effect learning knowledge for students.More over,this phomement may cause problem between parents and children or teachers and students.Finally, children spent more time in mobile phones they will chatting with friends on the internet and often live unreality. So,all people should put up the phones and enjoy life with our parents and friends without mobile phones.Let's detox!

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