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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13038
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分70.5分
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文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累学术词汇,拼写错误也要注意;请注意分段;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

用户练习作文:

the generation gap between amy and her father these days,the generation gap never fail to fascinate human beings.teenagers who live in nowdays often receive far more selfish than teengers who live in last generation.such is human nature,that a great teenagers often willing to sacrifice good relationship with their parents for the privilege of freedom.but parents are disagree with them,this is can give rise to the generation gap.as it did in the case of amy who the generation gap with her father. amy think her father is quite self-centered,a little bit vain above all in some ways quite unapproachable.however,her father is regarded as bestfriend.what's more ,they have five different view between them,such as during amy's childhood ,work,education and so on.what reason cause this situation?as far as i'm concerned,amy's father was more spoil to her.as a parents,we should treat with our child in intelligent rather than as a pampering parents.

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