小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Amy is my good friend. She is ten years old. She has a good-looking face. She like iceream. She live in Hainan. She is a primary student. She is my good friend. We uselly go to school togeter.Amy is my good friend. She is ten years old. She has a good-looking face. She like iceream. She live in Hainan. She is a primary student. She is my good friend. We uselly go to school togeter.