2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

作者词汇基本功很好，学术词汇表达也比较恰当；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；丰富从句的使用，文章会更出色。

In this modern era,the declining of life quality is becoming increasingly common, particularly in megacity or cosmopolis.Although it is such a complex issue ,i personally believe that traffic congestion as well as great pressure involve occupation are two main causes. Firstly,it is clear that with the development of economy and hi-tech automobile has become a essential tool to travel ,no matter from home to company or to a long distance site.Of course,it convenient public to travel outside and visit friends as well as family whenever they want.On the other hand,it also lead to heavy traffic jam and great air pollution,which caused great negative effect on our society or individuals. Moreover,people in this day and age loaded great burden deprive from jobs and competitors.As we can see,nowadays graduates have to compete with many applicants,not only from domestic,sometimes even come from oversee.So they have to spend much time on their workplace,which will reduce the occasions and times to get together with their families. To resolve this problem there are many things that wait us to deal with.I think government and cooperation should shoulder their responsibilities or duties.On the one hand,the authority must take effective measures ,for instance,implement some measures or enact laws to solve the traffic congestion dilemma.Furthermore,companies should decrease employees' work pressure and time to some extent. In sum,i personally stage that only the government and cooperations work hand in glove and make every endeavor can the public get the happy time they used own and keep our societies' prosperous as well as flourish!