2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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On Excessive Packaging At the moment, a lot of product was excessive packaging by reductor . such as the moon cake and some small gift. I think there are three reasons why in the socisity happen the circumstance. First, many people pursuit the fresh and counterculture,so make the needed in the market. Second, some food or gift that need to packaging ,for example,