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【题目要求】
100 years ago, human race believed we would make continue progress in all areas of life. Today, some people feel less certain about this. what areas of progress human race has made? What else areas we haven't developed?
【点评一】
本题是2009年5月21日的话题，属于抽象类话题。抽象类话题看似难写，实际上只要转换成具体话题就容易手了。进步的领域：科技，教育。仍需改进的领域：环保，犯罪，人口老龄化，动物保护，文化语言保护。本题几乎无所不包，雅思写作题库中几乎所有话题都能用于本题。
【点评二】
题目 Some people think the human race has made continual progress in all areas of life, while others believe that there is less certainty about this. What areas of progress human race has made? What else areas we have not developed?
一些人认为人类在各方面已经取得了不断的进步，而另外一些人认为并非如此。人类在哪些领域取得了进步？哪些领域没有取得发展？
开头段 How to make a better life never fails to capture people’s attention throughout much of the human history ,which serves as a catalyst for the continuing development in every aspect of life. Some people, however, believe that the so called “development” cannot be regarded as real progress.
中间段1 回答第一问：人类在哪些领域取得了进步？ 1. 众所周知，几个世纪以来，人类一直致力于通过发展科技来改善生存环境。
It is commonly believed that human beings have been striking for improving living conditions by evolving science and technology for many centuries.
【论证示范】
Due to the convenient transportation system, citizens in China are able to enjoy fresh American lemons which were once not available to Chinese or people in many other counties. Communication modes mainly relied on writing letters in the past also witnessed a significantly transformation with the advent of internet, making friends or families enable to contact each other instantly by their computers or tablets.2.其次，与过去相比，人类在医学领域取得了许多突破。
Furthermore, compared with the past , there are many breakthroughs having been achieved in medical care.
中间段2 回答第二问：哪些领域没有取得发展？ 1. 污染，全球变暖，物种灭绝等环境问题已经成为很多国家头痛的问题，它们经常会陷于经济发展和生态平衡的困境中。
Environmental problems in terms of pollutions, global warming ,species extinction and so forth, have been a great headache to most nations who always trap into a dilemma between economic development and ecological balance. 2.各个种族和宗教间的武装冲突是一个持续性的问题，这对世界的和平与和谐造成了威胁。
Arm conflict among various races and religions is another endless problem posing a large threat to world peace and harmony.
结尾段 To sum up, although a lack of knowledge concerning how to control human desire seems to be a big handicap to human civilization, it should be admitted that we have made a great progress in many fields , and the advancement is expected to continue.
How to make a better life never fails to capture human's attention. Indeed,there are some aspects we have developed hugely, while in some areas we produce many problems. Firstly, great achievement has been taken place in education. In china, our government has been implementing 9-year compulsory education which covers primary school and junior school and is free for the receivers. When students pass the National College Entrance Examination, they can go to universities. And students of the poor family background can apply for fund aid.Just be the true of china, many other countries have paid attention to education regardless of gender difference. Secondly, we make progress in human rights. Today, we regard the right of living and equality as the basic right of all human beings. "People under haven are one family," as Chinese ancient philosophy reveals. The countries who gover their citizens under violence, tyranny and dominance will be criticized by the United Nations. People now obtain much more support from government such as endowment insurance, unemployment insurance and medicare insurance. However, there are so many problems existing on the earth, and pollution is an unavoidable one. Many countries especially less developed country pour their resources into economic develpoment but neglect the nature. Therefore, air pollutionb and noise pollution have been cropping up, citizens are more likely to be afflicked with cancer. Nearly all the countries trap into a dilema between economic growth and enviornmental pollution. Arm conflict is another problem between various races and regions and definitely poses a threat on world peace and harmony. Terrorists of ISIS often launch assults to innocent peasants, which damage regional prosperity and political stability. To sum up, civilization advancement is interwowen with problems. While weighing all these factors, we should harbour confidence about our future. After all, measures are always more than matters.
