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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4499
要求:
题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分68.0分
评语:

作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;全文结构较为严谨;应增加从句和复杂句的使用,注意部分有错误的句子。

用户练习作文:

In recent years,more and more people are willing to use the Internet to communicate with each other ,people become lazier and lazier to stay at home than go out the side . In this circumstances ,we will lose our true minds and words ,we will become not truth . So if we want to change this situations, we must not be addicted to the Internet,we should do other things to alternate our cautions .We can take measures ,such as do some exercises with our friends and go hiking and so on. In my opinion ,the Internet have two sides ,one is good ,the other is bad .The good is that it's very convinen

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