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2004年专八英语作文真题:Should University Students Go in for Business

发布时间:2013-05-18 16:41浏览次数:3705
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题目 Should University Students Go in for Business?
说明 It was reported in the press some time ago that a few second-and third-year students in a provincial university decided to try their hands at business in order to get prepared for the future. They opened six small shops near their university. Their teachers and classmates had different opinions about this phenomenon. Some thought that the students' business experience would help them adapt better to society after graduation, while others held a negative view, saying that running shops might occupy too much of the students' time and energy which should otherwise be devoted to their academic study. What do you think?
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1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
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As the improvement of the society, graduate students faced a lot of unknown chanllenge for seeking the job.In order to get better future, students should learn more from society. Therefore,i think the university students should go in for business. Maybe some people think business could occupy students time and miss the attention from their study, its reasonable anxiety. But, there is three vital reason about why i support former idea : Firstly, Doing business increased the student income .So it freed the students family burden, and students could be independent and confident to be a real adult. Secondly, going in for business exercise students interpersonal communication skills and talking skills. How to speak? What to speak? Its a very important theme for this society.Therefore, students can learn more things from doing business than at school. Last but not least, personal connection is esstential to seek a job. doing business make us meet a lot people, these people is the symbol of chance.possessing these chances, our future will be another scenery. Therefore, doing business bring students more chances about work. Doing business is also a good job for students. Therefore, the university student should go in for business in their free time. it test the students ability of the personal communciation, and also make them understand the pain on living in the society.

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