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In accordance with what is described in the curve graph,we can observe distinctly that some significant changes have taken place in the past several years in terms of the number of migrant workers pouring into the city.In the year of 2000,the quantity of migrant workers in the city was no more than 50 thousand nevertheless,within roughly several years,it went up to 100 thousand after another five years.Obviously,it indicates that a large number of provincial people come to the city. Apparently,it is of no difficulty for us to put forward some factors responsible for these changes.At the top of the list,the majority of the Chinese population is constituted by folks coming from rural areas who are generally poor.In the light of a recent Internet,approximately 80% of the youngsters in the country cannot afford a house and are in need of improving their living environment.In addition,it is with the development of economy that a multitude of labors is in great demand in all walks of life in the city. Consequently,in the eyes of the above-mentioned which is discussed,one conclusion can be safely drawn that the current situation is positive and should be advocated.I am certain that this noticeable trend will continue in the forthcoming years.
