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enrich 使丰富；organize 组织；take an active part in 积极参与……
作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达，但要多积累学术词汇；从句数量偏少；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；请注意分段。
Let's sing red songs. Our school wanted to enrich the school life of the students, they organized a concert about singing red songs. we all taked an active part in the concert and the concert was finished successfully. Because our students usually have great press in the study, this activity let the press out. In my opinion, we should often join more activities like this. It not only gives our students the chance to know more new friends, but they can learn the means about the red songs. At the same time, we can become more active and we do not hate the study.
