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邢台二中2012―2013学年上学期高二年级期末测试试卷英语作文

发布时间:2013-05-17 17:27浏览次数:6608
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2010年以来,我国相继发生了几起校园暴力事件,使国人为之震惊,震惊之余,大家都陷入了沉思:我们该如何加强校园安全呢?请你以How to improve school safety为题,写一篇120词左右的短文。
参考词汇:校园campus 保安security guard
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可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用;文中词汇表达较为灵活,学术词汇需要加强,单词拼写要认真。

用户练习作文:

How to improve school safety Since 2010 our country has taken place plenty of objects that were school savage acts, which made us Chinese astonished.This also made us think about the fact that is the school safety.How to avoid the savage acts? What can we do? Here is my opinions for this. First,the campus should make some rules and regulationston to treat the behaviour.As far as I'm concerned,the most important reason that couse this is school management. Just like the opposition to Janpanese, if there was no strong manage systerm among our army,our revolutionists will not beat the Japanese.Aiming this ,I suggest the campus need some security guards,for it can improve the arrogance. Second,the goverment should take concerted actions at the same time,such as making laws and publicizing the safety common knowledge. In a word, combining school and goverment,we will make a safe and beautiful school, and we must strongly believe the brighter day is approaching.

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