2009全国中考英语试题汇编试题(34)写作:唱红歌

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Let's sing red songs In order to enrich our lives, our school has organized a red song concert recently. Everyone took an active part in this activity, and the concert was successfully held. As you know, we are always so busy learning the lessons that we feel stressed out sometimes. The concert gave us a chance to relax. In my opinion, red songs can make us learn more about the past. And we will love our country more than before. This kind of activity is very meaningful, isn't it?