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【题目要求】
100 years ago, human race believed we would make continue progress in all areas of life. Today, some people feel less certain about this. what areas of progress human race has made? What else areas we haven't developed?
【点评一】
本题是2009年5月21日的话题，属于抽象类话题。抽象类话题看似难写，实际上只要转换成具体话题就容易手了。进步的领域：科技，教育。仍需改进的领域：环保，犯罪，人口老龄化，动物保护，文化语言保护。本题几乎无所不包，雅思写作题库中几乎所有话题都能用于本题。
【点评二】
题目 Some people think the human race has made continual progress in all areas of life, while others believe that there is less certainty about this. What areas of progress human race has made? What else areas we have not developed?
一些人认为人类在各方面已经取得了不断的进步，而另外一些人认为并非如此。人类在哪些领域取得了进步？哪些领域没有取得发展？
开头段 How to make a better life never fails to capture people’s attention throughout much of the human history ,which serves as a catalyst for the continuing development in every aspect of life. Some people, however, believe that the so called “development” cannot be regarded as real progress.
中间段1 回答第一问：人类在哪些领域取得了进步？ 1. 众所周知，几个世纪以来，人类一直致力于通过发展科技来改善生存环境。
It is commonly believed that human beings have been striking for improving living conditions by evolving science and technology for many centuries.
【论证示范】
Due to the convenient transportation system, citizens in China are able to enjoy fresh American lemons which were once not available to Chinese or people in many other counties. Communication modes mainly relied on writing letters in the past also witnessed a significantly transformation with the advent of internet, making friends or families enable to contact each other instantly by their computers or tablets.2.其次，与过去相比，人类在医学领域取得了许多突破。
Furthermore, compared with the past , there are many breakthroughs having been achieved in medical care.
中间段2 回答第二问：哪些领域没有取得发展？ 1. 污染，全球变暖，物种灭绝等环境问题已经成为很多国家头痛的问题，它们经常会陷于经济发展和生态平衡的困境中。
Environmental problems in terms of pollutions, global warming ,species extinction and so forth, have been a great headache to most nations who always trap into a dilemma between economic development and ecological balance. 2.各个种族和宗教间的武装冲突是一个持续性的问题，这对世界的和平与和谐造成了威胁。
Arm conflict among various races and religions is another endless problem posing a large threat to world peace and harmony.
结尾段 To sum up, although a lack of knowledge concerning how to control human desire seems to be a big handicap to human civilization, it should be admitted that we have made a great progress in many fields , and the advancement is expected to continue.
In order to help young generation adapt to fast-paced life style in modern society, some Several individuals claim that youngsters should be encouraged to attend school as early as possible. ; However however, another view is that only after at 7 years old can children little ones be sent to school. On a personal note, I agree the opinion of the later. On the one hand, those who support of sending young ones earlier to school may present following arguments. In the first place Firstly, being exposed to formal courses earlier could be beneficial to juveniles’ future career. This is because attending class at an earlier age means they could graduate from their school at a younger age, . thereby Thereby they can accumulate more working experience and perform better on their workplace, which can help them earn a higher salary. Besides Secondly, this behavior enables parents to focus more on their business. As their little ones would receive education in school rather than at home, they can, therefore as a result, spend more time on their jobs instead of educating their children sons and daughters. Discuss why children get formal study at school as early as possible. On the other hand, others say that going to school t 7 can be more justifiable. To begin with , there are concerns that taking courses later can have positive effects on their study. If children boys and girls are more mature, they are more likely to understand the content of their subjects. For example, in normal case, children minors who are 8 years can generally grasp knowledge than those who are only 3 years old, which means that juveniles at an older age can commonly learn more efficiently than the younger ones. In addition, it is important for juveniles juniors to spend more time with their loved ones in their earlier years since they need supports from their families. With parents’ favor, their there can be more confident in school when they grow older, which allows them to show a better performance in their school. In my view, children little ones should receive formal education at certain age. The main reason is that in their earlier years, juveniles may too young to follow the courses in school and their confidence and interest in study may be discouraged. Consequently, we should educate them step by step rather than only in one step. In conclusion , going to academy as early as possible can prepare the young ones to establish their lives early and it allows the parents to focus on their livelihoods but joining the school at the right age can prepare them to accept knowledge according to their maturity as well as it makes them enjoy their childhood adequately. In my opinion, I believe on the latter view.
