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雅思写作范文:父母应该多陪孩子

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The Parents Should Company Their Children Nowadays,more and more people became busier and busier for their job. So that most of them have few time to stay with their family.However,the children can't develop well without their parents' company. Everyone knows that parents are the best teachers of the children.In our daily life,some news shows that the kid who doesn't live with the parents all the time more possible dose the wrong things.Because they are lack of conscious. Probable no one had told them about this.So,they may not recognize what they do is wrong. Children need love,especially from the parents. No matter how busy you are,spend enough time on your kids.

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