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2008年专四作文真题:志愿服务的益处

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:40浏览次数:2448
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题目 The Benefits of Volunteering
说明 December 5th is International Volunteers Day. Since 1985, when the United Nations announced the special day, tens of millions of people around the world have volunteered to help those in needs. China now has 4.5 million registered volunteers who have provided more than 4.5 billion hours of volunteer work. What can you gain from volunteering?
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1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
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When it comes to volunteer, we'll consider it as a lofty work that makes our world better. Undoubtedly, volunteering can not only help others, but also benefit ourselves. Definitely, volunteering does help those people in need. Volunteers do their best to assist those in trouble, in hunger, or even in danger, which contribute to build a bright and peaceful world. Besides, volunteering helps us become better. By volunteering, we would not gain fortune but gratitude, content and happiness. Therefore, we would be thankful for what we have owned and cherish it, which will be beneficial to forming the correct individual values, that is indispensable to ourselves. On all accounts, volunteering does be of benefit to us. Hence, let's spare no effort to be one of them.

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