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新目标(Go for it)版初中英语九年级-Uint5 单元测试写作:有烦恼向谁说?

发布时间:2013-06-26 18:03浏览次数:4644[网页划词已开启]
要求:
提示:假如你叫王平,参加了学校的”有烦恼向谁说?”的调查活动(a survey)。


调查结果:

1、大多数向同学、朋友说(理由:年龄相仿,容易交流和理解)

2、一些向老师、家长说(理由:经验丰富、可以得到帮助)
3、少数自己独立解决(理由:不愿与人交流,难以与人相处)


请你根据中文提示用英语给某报社编辑写一封信(信的开头与结尾已经给出),说明情况并提出你自己的观点。字数60-80词左右,不必逐句翻译,可适当发挥。


Dear Editor,

I am a Grade 9 student. Recently we have made a survey ----”To whom do you go when in trouble?” Here are the results.
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Yours Sincerely,
                                                                  Wang Ping
用户的作文(系统评分77.5分
评语:

过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了。

用户练习作文:

Firstly, most of the students stated that they will go to their classmates or friends, because they feel very comfortable to exchange their thoughts with them as they are on the same age. Secondly, other students said that they usually talk to their parents or teachers who have lots of experiences to provide proper guidance. It is useful to solve their problems. At last, the minority of the students are used to searching for solutions by themselves. They find themselves difficult to get along with others, so they are not willing to communicate with them.

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