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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

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Imagine that you wake up early to prepare oatmeal in a delicate bowl with colorful fruits on and equipped with a lovely spoon aside. Instead of enjoying it, you take out your phone, slide again and again on the screen, struggle to find out the optimal filter suitable for your breakfast, and finally take one photo. What you do next is to post it on the WeChat and Sina, with words like that” A girl on diet. Only this!” and three sorrow emojis. Afterwards, you keep your eyes on checking the feedback rather than concentrate on your breakfast. Likes and comment comes as follow. But are you really happy with this bustling morning? Maybe you think you are recording the moment, but in fact you are missing it. Brought up in a vigorous era with sophisticated technology and explosive information, it seems we can’t clear out what happened nearby, if we don’t follow every WeChat moment. Therefore, we are inclined to fall in the pit of “sharing everything in our life on the social media.” Just like the above example, our generation feel satisfied to post every item on social media that goes into mouths. Some of us are addicted to social network. For those who feel depressed without updating status, even in moment of breaking up a relationship, the first thing comes into mind is posting gifs to comfort themselves. Frankly speaking, this social media provided us with both a promise and a predicament. The promise is that we have more chances to know the others’ status, such as a friend far away from us. Meanwhile, the predicament is that we sacrifice a lot time in posting picture and updating status. The social media is just a tool but as it turns out, we always can’t make a good use of it which at last leads to a battle field to gain sense of superiority, like taking photos before meals, taking a selfie before indulging into the scenery. Now even the pace becomes the posting target, which shows our downside of social media excess. We have been accustomed to posting everything and wait likes and comments with anxiety to prove the sense of existence. However, how can we benefit from the sense of existence in the virtual world? There is a saying goes“30 million online followers can’t not substitute three real friends in life.” That is, being friends is not the same thing as having friends. So what should we do to change this lifestyle? On the one hand, in order to have a better understanding of each other, we are expected to have a face-to-face talk, not a stalk on moments. On the other hand, it is a better way to enjoy the beauty in our eyes instead of the camera of our phone. Although social media get more and more smart and intelligent, revealing our life without limitation will just generate a larger gap between our real life and cooler our relationship. Get rid of posting day and night, find our own way to enjoy life and bear the happy moment in heart not in WeChat or Sina.

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