小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

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Our school incoming a new teacher, she is a beautiful lady and she has big eyes and long fair. She teach us English, we are love her very much.One time,she give me one book, the name is , I like it very much, because it tell me "you will be succuel if you're study too hard'.