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高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

发布时间:2013-05-16 16:20浏览次数:22871
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某英文杂志新设“我的家乡”专栏向读者征文,请按下面提供的要点写一篇100个词左右的短文,介绍你的家乡过去的情况和现在的变化,向该杂志投稿。短文标题已给出。
过去:家乡小镇绿树环抱;小河清清鱼儿嬉戏;房屋简陋 街道狭窄;人们劳作生活清贫;现在:高楼大厦厂店林立;大小车辆驰骋街头;工业发展环境恶化;树木减少鱼儿消失;治理污染当务之急。
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As a member of my hometown,I really found something changed now.Comparing with my friend's home,I am very upset because it let me recognized my hometown before. You could breathe the fresh air in every moring after you woke up.You could have a good look on the lovely birds in the trees. You couldn't imagine how wonderful it is! Alough I grow up having my own job now,I still remebered the exciting emotions when I was very young.Catching fish in the big river is a kind of enjoy for my friends and I. However,things all changed two years ago.You can never see the clear river or fish anymore.All the tall buidings seem to be buided up overnight.Too many cars repalce the big trees.And companies are open even for the nights.It is really a dream for me to sleep quikly. How I wish that the government can do something for us.

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