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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17551
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

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With the policy opening, there are plenty of families with two children, and parents had to face lots of problems. Due to the busy work, parents often have not enough time to take care of their kids. Thus, some people think that older children should be required to take care of the younger children when they are at home. Indeed,it will be a good idea. First of all, the older children will have a sense of achievement if they care for their young sisters or brothers. The feat of accomplishing is conductive to self-actualization and self-improvement, which will inevitably elevate to self-esteem. Inflated esteem will proportionally contribute to more solid achievement. This is a virtuous circle toward a better personality. For example, my uncle who worked in a big company was once awarded because of solving a complex task. After that he worked even harder and gained the elevated esteem. Furthermore, the older children can get some experience about looking after others. Experience refers to the accumuation of knowledge or skill that result from direct participation in events or activities. For the older children, they have learned how to care for others from young, which foster a prosocial behavior. Our experience is a wealth that can enrich our life. For instance, When we enjoy modern educatonal facilities and indulge in the prestigious academic atmosphere, we can harvest valuable educational experience. When we undergo the training of expertise experiences serve as an enlightenment brightening our career path. There is no denying that different experience will change the personality or life of a person. Besides, more love will grow between brothers or sisters. As the older children look after the younger, they will unavoidy share their emotions. And then, they can form an emotional tie among them, which will link their feelings. This attachment is beneficial to harmonious relationship as well as to the fulfillment of a project. For example, my brother took good care of me wheni was young, he played with me and told interesting stories to me, so my brother and I are on good emotional terms. We share sorrow and happiness from childhood to now. As a result, our lives becom happier . In deed, the older children should be required to take care of the younger children when they are at home. As a member of a family, everyone should do his part to share the tasks.

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