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with the echology of the information, e-books have a great plenty in the market. e-books are active. more and more people choose the e-books rather than traditional books ,for which that the e-books are convenient to bring and it can not occupy much space. only you point the phone or the computer , all the books what you like would show you at once. therefore, the e-books are being popular in nowadays. with the developing of the e-books , some people think that the e-books would replace the traditional books. however, the e-books are more quickly , more cheaper and more convenient . as far as i am concerned , e-books really have its advantage .we can choose it to reduce more time and money to have a read. but , i don't think that the e-books would replace the traditional books. however , the traditional books have its history and it is widely applicated in our life. and the e-books can not replace the traditional books that it give the people a reality feeling.