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江苏省苏州市高新区2011届九年级上学期期末调研测试作文:父母有没有必要陪读

发布时间:2013-06-24 17:54浏览次数:832
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Dear editor,
    I'm writing to discuss about whether our parents should accompany us studying.
We do have different opinions on this matter.
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Best wishes!
                                                   Yours,
Liu Tao
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Dear editor,   Recently our class have had a heated discussion on whether students should be accompanied by parents studying at school. Opinions are divided on the topic.   70% of my classmates hold the view that there is no need for parents to do so. For one thing, we may fall into the habit of dependence, which will have a negative effect on the development of our self-control ability. For another, it will affect our parents’ work, study and rest.   However, 30% of us are in favor of it. In their opinion, with parents accompanying us, we can spare more time to concentrate on our study and we will become more healthy. Furthermore, parents can help set our study goal and urge us to complete our study tasks. Also we can overcome difficulties on our own. with their encouragement and develop a good habit of studying. Best wishes! Yours, Liu Tao

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