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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):幸福之路

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:08浏览次数:4813
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Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on happiness by referring to the saying "Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them." You can cite examples to illustrate your point and then explain how you can develop your ability to deal with problems and be happy. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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What can we see from the picture is that two lovers is jumping through hoops called education background, finance and property respectively, which are on their way to marriage. In another words, they couldn’t get married until meeting these demands. It vividly demonstrates the existing dilemma for the couples——it is the reality situation not love that is the key to the combination of two people. From my perspective, for marriage, love is the reason why the lovers could become families while the material conditions are just the least thing to be considered. On one hand, love weighs a lot for a happy marriage. When two fall in love with each other and form a family, they must be able to appreciate the advantages of each other and tolerate the shortcomings of each other, which is the fundamental of a wonderful family. Without love, families are just another type of strangers. On the other hand, love encourages the lovers to make no efforts to improve their life quality, achieving higher education, raising more money and purchasing larger real estate. To sum up, marriage is supposed to no bars but love. Any two people in love have the right to step into the palace of marriage, regardless of the material conditions of the circumstance.

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