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江苏省张家港市2011届九年级上学期期末试卷写作:亲情问题演讲稿

发布时间:2013-06-25 18:52浏览次数:1973
要求:

假设你正在参加江苏省中学生英语演讲比赛,请针对有些父母亲经常翻看孩子日记或书包这一现象,写一篇演讲稿,陈述你的观点。


演讲稿的主要内容应包括:

认为同学们不必为此烦恼,,希望能够体谅父母的苦衷。

建议以谈话、写信等方式与父母交流和沟通。


注意:
1.词数100左右。
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

3.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计人总词数。


Good morning,ladies and gentlemen.
Some of us are having problems with our parents,as they often look into our school bags
or read our diaries.____________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you!
用户的作文(系统评分81.0分
评语:

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但学术词汇稍显不足;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

用户练习作文:

I hate this because it makes me feel I am not treated with dignity while I think I have been grown up and I am equal to the adults in sharing personal space. I could remember how I had been annoyed and unhappy about my mother when I found out she was looking into my diary. I was so excited as to yelled and said something bad to her. We were not happy about each other for a while. Nevertheless when I calmed down I regretted for the yelling and fighting. Espescially when I saw my mother washing my clothes, cooking my favourite food or looking after me, I was so regretful that I cried many times. At last I forgave my mother and gave my apology to her then she did vice versa. We had a deal that she would never look into my diary or other personal stuff without my permissions and I would share my thoughts with her. That is the story of my mother and me. I hope the story could bring something valuable to you and make you understand that communications is important between you and your parents as they care about you so much, tell them everything!

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