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Ladies and Gentlemen, Would you like to join a club to make your college life more colourful? Come to Sports Club. In our club, You can do any exercise you want.we have badminton,vollball, ping-pong and so on for your choice. We have a lots of activity at the weekend. If you join our club, I promissing that you never regret this decision. sport club is a club full of engary. You can make many new friends in there, and share you sport skill and eperience. You also can learn some sport that you don not know. Otherwise, Accroding to attend kind of activity, You can improve your communication skill. Join us! Fall into sport and groth with us. Wirte your basic imformation on paper with photo. We wil contact you as soon as possible. we look forward to your coming.