2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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As we all knows computer is the greatest invention in the 21 century. Computer make big change for our life.It make our life more convenient.With the help of computer,we can know the outside world at home ,meet friend from the other side of globe.It can save human work.Nowadays,we use computer everywhere.Student use computer to learn the newest knowledge,doctor use it to do operation.