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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71533
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Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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A Beautiful City in China Dear friend, welcome to my hometown--Guangfeng. My hometown is a beautiful place, it is locate in Shangrao city, Jiangxi province. Jiangxi province is a typical southern Chinese area. So there are many mountains, red soil and river in Jiangxi province. Though there are many mountains and red soil, just a fewer rivers in my hometown. But my hometown also is a good place, we have a majestic mountain called Tongbo Mountain, it is beautiful mountain. There are many tree and small river in the mountain, so more and more people visit to here to avoid summer heat. They get together to go swimming, barbecue, go camping and so on. It is very lively at Tongbo Mountain when the summer coming. I love Tongbo Mountain, because we can do many actives in there. Not only we have a lively mountain, but also we have many famous food, like Tiangui Pear, it is a kind of water-laden pear. You can tasted it, dear friend, it is delicious and healthy. If you have a throat pain, you can eat it with sugar. It is helpful for your throat pain. Also we have a cookie called Paibing. It is a good choice to eat when you get hungry. Paibing is hard cookie, but it can help children to improve their teeth. If you really want to eat soft Paibing, it also can be soft, just needs a easy step to change it, put it in water and wait a minute. It will be change to soft cookie. It is so amazing, right? Well, this is my hometown and I love it. Welcome to my hometown. We will make you feel at home.

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