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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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文中词汇使用灵活,但请加强单词拼写的检查;可适当增加从句的使用,注意文中的一些小错误;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。

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It is commonly agreesive in most people that money makes mare go. So,mony has influncial with us.In modern sociaty, a large of people think that, higher degree higher pays. In some case,that's right. Above table prises that. Short degree along with little degree. And, the most unemployment are the lower degreers. Along with higer dgree,http://dict.kekenet.com/images/yi-icon.gifpeople occupy more less.a Result from above phonomen,we should learn that if you want to increase one's py,increse sonemone's education's pay. Our Chinese priminster said"knoeledge is power brings warmth,power and happiness." I agree with him. Even though ,many ways cross to Rome,but common people gernarally obay the common way. They just usually walk "go to school" this way. Excep this, Rome was not built in one day. In this "go to school way",we should be deligent to save our knowledge to walk this path in safe. In the ending, to improve our common power,it is the first step that education pay.

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