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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:38浏览次数:11257
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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In this society,smart mobile phone is people's best love.Many people can't leave it.Mobile phone takes more easy,but aslo make ours to be lazy and weaken. In the life,we can order dinner by mobile phone,could't go to out.It is so easy.Many people like this,include me.I can eat delicious food at home and not go to shop when i fatigue.If i can't foud place what i want to go.Also could ask person or app by mobile phone. But thses easy aslo make ours lazy.Even some people can't leave it.If people are crossing the street looking at their cell phones and using walking sticks in order to see. This is very danger. mobile phone is a utilize, not life. So,we should go to out,not play phone at home.we should leave phone to talk with people.That,our life could be more interesting.

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