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2013年2月2日雅思大作文真题TASK2

发布时间:2013-05-20 22:25浏览次数:821
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Some people think it's all bad for children to watch TV, others believe watching TV can bring positive effects on children when they grow up, discuss both and give your own opinion. 

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参考过去出现的相关题目可以帮助同学们更好地解题:
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2008.05.10 Children watch tv: at home VS school
2009.05.16 Imagination and language skills: Read books Vs watch TV
2013.01.05 2009.05.16
2010.03.27 children more Tv, less activities, why? measures?
2010.09.25 Too much TV for children, How affect? What measures?
2010.11.04 Parents read for children Vs free choice on TV/internet/books
2007.12.15 Disasters & violence on TV: why, effects?
2007.11.17 Ads aimed at children should be banned?
第一段:看电视是孩子们很重要的课余活动,有些孩子甚至对电视成瘾
第二段:看电视太多的消极面
1对身体健康不利
2 减少和同龄人以及家人的互动与交流
3 对智力发展不利
4 有些电视内容不适合小孩子
第三段:适量有选择的看电视有益儿童发展
1 增加知识,和探索世界的兴趣
2 丰富课余生活
3 和父母或同龄人一起看有助于更好的亲子或朋友互动
第四段:适量地选择适合孩子的电视节目,并且尽量和父母或同龄人一同看电视有助于孩子的健康发展,否则电视将对孩子产生消极影响。
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Nowadays, more and more children using electronic products, and every family have a television in their house. some people hold the opinion of 'it is bad for children to watch TV', while other people think watching TV can give children benefits when they grown up. First of all, watch TV is bad for children's body and for family. If children watch too much TV in one day, their eyes will be worse and they may need to wear eyeglasses. in addition, watch too much television can effects their intellectual development, watch TV have frames for children, so children don't need to imagine the scene, this means they don't need to think. For family, children watch too much television will decrease their communication with family and peers. Besides, there are some details in the TV is not inadequacy for children. Although, there are many disadvantages for children watching television. nevertheless, watch TV still have some positive effect for children. Children can expand their knowledge from TV. there are some documentary on television and news in different time. these kind of TV programs can enrich children's extracurricular life, they can find the things they like to do or want to learn in the TV. watch television in a appropriate amount with family or friends can have better interaction. If not, children watch TV will have negative effects. In my opinion, children need to watch television in a appropriate amount, however parents can't let children watch too much, it's bad to their eyes and their intellectual develop. on the other hand, children can watch TV suitable to learn more knowledge

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