湖南怀化市2012-2013年高二上学期期末试卷英语作文

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There are some classmates who lose theri confindent in learnning English well . Now i will tell you something about why we need learning English and the important of study English.Learning a foreign language can make me talk with foreign firends and know theri culthur.With those,it can open our my mind.If you do well in learnning English you could apply fou a famous unniversity easlly.What is more ,it maybe has some effective on your work in the future. I want to interduce some ideas to improve your english. Firstly,you must read a passage wrote in english everday. Scendly, Writing an english compositing once a day . Thirdly,it is so important to remunber the english words three times a day.