雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

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In this modern era,travelling abroad is becoming increasing prevalent with the increase of income and development of international air transport .However,whether it caused more harm than good is a controversial one.In my view,the booming international travel market not only can boost local economy, but also it play an important in broaden people's horizon and enrich public's knowledge. Firstly,it is conspicuous that people has benefit a lot from journey,especially travel out of the country,on the one hand the vision has been broadened ,likewise experience or knowledge also be accumulated .For example,when explores travel to another country various of specific cultures and spectacular landscape will be presented ,consequently our comfortable feeling will be spring up and the division between differ nations will be narrowed. However,it also lead to many severe problems,for instance, environment pollution,the damage to the local culture heritage ,which will lead to a negative impact on local residents in the long run.Take Amazon forest as a example,with the increasing number of tourists presenting,great damage has been caused to local environment and natural climate. Although there still exist a series of potential problems when it comes to international journey,it is not mean that we should constrain the flourishing development of international travel market.Conversely, nations and countries should work hand in grove to offset its drawbacks by using of hi-tech and rise the the environmental conscious of the tourists and inhabitants. To sum up,I personally believe that we should boost the development of international tourism.Meanwhile,pollution problem or others should not be neglected.By doing this,we can ensure that whole world get along with each other harmoniously as well as closely!