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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):有意义的生活

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:13浏览次数:9005
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Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it." You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to make your life more meaningful. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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My Experience of Selling It was impressing that my that my first experience of selling something. We were required to sell something. We were required to tell something in the speech lesson for our homework. Of course, it was a challenge for me, because it was my first time to sell something. However, we managed to finish it successfully. First of all, I would like to introduce the product we sold. We sold a kind of dessert whose name is Mu Kang Bei. It was complex. It is made of milk, ice cream, chocolate and several kinds of fruits. It tastes good for the reason that it is sweet and a little sour. People may feel cool after they taste Mu Kang Bei. A good team work plays an important role in successful work. Thanks for my teammates. We work together. A beautiful PPT was made by Sally. Attractive appearance of Mu Kang Bei was made by Kasey. Fresh fruits were carefully cut by me. We work efficiently. Because of our hard work, our products didn’t make us disappointed. Our products were sold out soon when we began to sell. Actually, it took us two days to finish the products in order to keep the products fresh and fantastic. But we just spent few minutes to sold out of them. I think my selling was a success for its impressive moment in the experience. The Mu Kang Bei were made by ourselves. People who tasted our dessert feel happy. They cheered. They smiled like babies. They showed their appreciation and happiness to us. We were inspired a lot! This was the most impressive moment in this experience. This experience not only made us enjoy, but also made us learn a lot. Good teamwork makes great contributions to success. Hard working and sincerity are the keys to successful business. Last but not least, a good tactic is necessary for success. For example, an attractive appearance will make people more feel like to eat your dessert. This is my first selling experience.

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