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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71533
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Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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welcome to you visting my hometown .my hometown is a close sea city ,it's a beautiful city and it belong to Guangdong provice . my hometown name is zhanjiang , Guangdong lost of sea annimal is came form zhanjiang , of couse ,these sea annimal is so fresh ,piece is not expensive and popular in guangdong . actually ,eles those fresh sea annimal ,zhanjiang has a big diede fire moutians ,now it is became a lake ,the lake name is yueya lake .you konw ,like this diede fire moutians only two in the Asia .The lake of a big park ,this park of country protect nature park .In the park ,you can see a emouns tortoise lie to the door ,all right ,this tortoise is make from some fire mountians roke ,look at is so rocking .you come in the park ,these big tress ,fresh atmostance ,the samll road and the sing from nature ,well,you will be saying"that 's so good ". my hometown has other food ,nature place or great playing place ,if you come here ,you must to go to my narrate place .i delegate my home town welcoming for you

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