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江苏省盐城市初级中学2011届九年级上学期期末考试写作:与父母相处的问题

发布时间:2013-06-24 18:03浏览次数:2119
要求:
你将代表学校参加盐城市中学生英语演讲比赛,演讲的题目是“Learning to get along with our parents”。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿,内容要点如下:


现象

经常跟父母发火,甚至几天不讲话

原因
1、父母过分关注分数
2、我们……

措施(不少于三点)
1、我们应该和父母沟通
2、我们……
3、我们……

要求:

1、表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;

2、必须包括所有相关信息,并作适当的发挥;
3、词数:100词左右(演讲稿的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
4、不得使用真实姓名和校名等。
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. Today my topic is ‘Learning to get along with our parents’.
These days, most of us feel it is hard to get along with our parents. ____________________
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    That’s all for my speech. Thank you!
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用户练习作文:

We are used to not speaking to them so much, some of us even not talk to their parents for days. And it is much easier to start a fight between us and our parents than when we were at younger ages. Why is this? I think the answer is the age. We are at the age that youngs cannot get along well with their parents. At this age, we start to have our own thoughts about the world and establish our own judgement references system to the society and environment. We start to have different views with our parents, which looks like repellent to them. As they loved and cared about us so much, they are to worry about that the repellence might drive us to the dark side of life. Then they begin to focus on us. They would focus on everything include attitude, opinion, friends and so on. But unfortunately it is going to make us even more repellent when we feel being focused, because youngs hate being focused which makes us feel uncomfortable.That is how the vicious circle built! To deal with this, I have three suggestions. Firstly youngs should often communicate with parents, let them know what are you thinking. Secondly parents should admit and accept the fact that their children have differences with them in thoughts. Thirdly parents learn to appreciate their children's different opinions.

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