2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，学术词汇使用稍显不足；有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用。

Nowadays,Online Shopping has been a popular mater,which takes a lot of beneficial convenient ways. With it,we can buy what we want when drinking.Moreover,we can get the things we like where we don't need to go buy.However,anyhow,everything has two sides.Even thought it has the convenient Online shopping,it still has some worse matter.For example,we cann't know if it is good.Another,the goods may be broken where it has been sent for us. In my opinion,I think we shoud be wariness when we shopping online.