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2010年专四作文真题:学生雇佣清洁工

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:48浏览次数:5299
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题目 Should College Student Hire Cleaners?
说明 It was recently reported in a newspaper that six students who shared a dorm at a local university hired a cleaner to do laundry and cleaning once a week. And each of them paid her 60 Yuan a month. This has lead to a heated debate as to whether college students should hire cleaners. Should College Student Hire Cleaners?
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1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
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Firstly, hiring cleaners can change us into lazy people. We will become lazier and tend to depend on others if we always don't do cleaning by ourselves. If we don't heir cleaners but clean the room by ourselves, we will become more dependent, which is of great benefit for us in the future life. Secondly, we will spend a sum of money in employing cleaners, which could have been used in other aspects. As we all know, college students get money from their parents. Therefore, we should not spend money casually. On the contrary, we ought to make every penny meaningful. Moreover, thriftiness is a great quality. There does the saying that the man who saves when young will have more to spend when he is old. The principle of frugality applies to many undertakings. It is important for us to cultivate the good habits of diligence and frugality.

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