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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:38浏览次数:11257
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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Disussion on overuse of mobile phone According to the above picture,people are crossing the road with their mobile phone in one hand and their walking sticks in the ather. This picture reflects the current situation of people,especially a common phenomenon of young people. Nowadays,with the continous development and progress of economy and technology,the use of smart phones is more and more common.In people's daily life,in addition to the most basic use of mobile phones to contact relatives and friends.Another convenient way is to use them for offline payment.The popularization of Alipay and WeChat has made life very convenient.Nowadays people travel only with mobile phones to solve the problem of food,clothing and shelter.Every coin has two sides,and the use of mobile phones has its disadvantage.People's overuse of mobile phones has made them "bow heads".We can see that they are playing with their heads down no matter where and when. Overuse of mobile phones has a lot of bad effects.First of all,it is easy to lead to vision loss for teenagers,and it will affect their academic perfomance when they are addicted to it.Secondly,it will make them lack of communication and concern with their relatives and friends.Finally,it will have a bad impact on the cervical spine,staying up late playing and not like sports,which will lead tothe deciline of peoples physical quality.Last but not least, I hope people can reasonably control the use time of mobile phones and not rely on them too much.

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