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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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We can observe that there are many people crossing the street. Instead of looking at the way, they are staring at their cell phones and using walking sticks to see. lt is obvious that they are fascinated with cell phones while even ignore their security. We learn from the cartoon that cellphones have been increasingly widespread in people's life. Cell phonesare of great benefit to all of us. One ofthe most ohvious ndvantaaes is that we can contact with our friends and relatives more conveniently than ever before. However, it is mobile-phones'advantages that lead some people to overuse or be addicted to them, which tends to exert a negative impact on ourlife. For example, oversusing cellphones will reduce face-to-face communication among people. It seems that most of usenjoy the convenience of contact at theexpense of interpersonal relationships.Information distribution tools and social networking tools, in particular, have attracted all ofour attention, which tempts us to keep our eyes on the screen around thecorner of every second. Then, do not expect us to talk with the people aroundus, we don't have time! Science and technology and modern tools should be served as an "angel" to improve our living strandard, rather thana devil to disturb our normal life andcommunication. Just imagine, live oneday without mobile phone, will you berelaxed? Or anxious?

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