- 分享到:
词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；作者英语功底扎实，可适当调整文中从句数量；全文结构较为严谨。
Nowadays, human beings are suffering more and more from the sins that they had done. A lot of activities, for instance, constructing new living places, developing planting areas by cutting down forests, building up factories to product with so many natural materials wasted and also enormous poisonous things given off, are to a degree irreversibly negatively effected the plants and animal species in the nature. It is somehow lucky of human beings to come to realize that our activities has largely affected the balance of nature. But people's attitudes towards the resolutions to this severe problem seperate a lot. Some people think as to the loss due to human's activities is too huge to make up and any measure we take now cannot substantially preserve the environment back to the original one. So, they feel desperate about the situation in the current stage and do not look forward to any change in what us human beings can do to avoid a bigger loss. Others seem to be more concerned about the problem and make their great efforts to work out the solution to improve the situation. They believe it is never too late to make some change as we have already got to know about the problem. People in different fields are altogether to build eco-friendly models in every sphere to protect the plants and animals in the nature. Due to their great efforts, many species of plants and animals have been saved successfully. And all of us see the hope from their work to set up the faith inside us to build a human society which exists harmoniously with the nature. So, we can never be cowardly in confrontation with the severe problem or give way to it, though it seems hopeless to regain our original eco-system. What we should do now is to slow down the destruction and further protect the nature by saving more and more plants, animal species as well as the environment that suitable for their living.
