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湖南怀化市2012-2013年高二上学期期末试卷英语作文

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:04浏览次数:3168
要求:
Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是一名英语课代表,发现部分同学对英语学习失去了信心。请你写一篇词数不少于100字的英语短文来鼓励他们,唤起其对学习英语的兴趣。
写作要点:
1、学习英语的重要性。
2、提高英语成绩的措施(至少3点)。
用户的作文(系统评分75.5分
评语:

文中词汇使用较丰富,学术词汇使用要加强;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。

用户练习作文:

As we know, English has already become an international language. It is widely used in the world. However, a few students find it hard to master it.It is very important for us to learn English well.Because when we live in other counties,we will talk with them by English. Let me show how. Firstly, make up your mind to learn English well and never give it up. Secondly, it is an effective way to read the text aloud in the morning and try to remember the important words, phrases and patterns. Thirdly, it is suggested that you should finish all the homework on time. When you come across some problems, turn to your teacher or classmates for help. Don't be afraid of making mistakes.You should everyone all can make mistakes.And you are not the worst. Believe you and you are the best!

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