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2012年6月17日托福独立写作真题附范文:孩子功课

发布时间:2013-06-06 13:06浏览次数:516
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Parents should help children to do their work or encourage children to do their work independently.

话题:父母、儿童教育、成长

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When we are audult, there are plent of tasks should we do and most of the time that we should ffinish it ourselves. so how to increase the capility of solving questions is most vital affair that we needt to consider more carefully since we are juist kid. As far as i'm concerned, parents should encouage the children to do thier work independently. As we all konw, if the kids finish the mission by asking for the help from parents, they would incline to denpend on others rather than do it themselves. and then, they become less think question deeply. it's not good for their growth in study. The capability would extend to the middle school, the high school, and the whole period of the time of study they own. Something should noted that not only the ability of the children learn from the procession of study is significant, but also the behavior of hoiw they think about the problems they meet in their life as well as the future is the most fundamental part in the life. In addtional, the parents also could help the chidren when they extremely confused after thinking a lot. In that time, the help will be the most valuable movement it deserved.

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