2002年考研英语作文真题:An American girl in traditional Chinese costume

作者用词生动多样，学术词汇使用比较准确，但有少数拼写错误；能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。

In accordance with what is detailedly demonstrated in the diagram above,we can observe distinctly that significant changes have taken place in the past decade in terms of citizens'diet.The consumption of grain,the staple food of our daily life,has been on a rapid decline all the time.Based on the data which is provided,folks can know that the consumption percentage of grain was 49% in 2000 nevertheless,it dropped to 40% in 2010.By contrast,some high-energy food,such as milk and meat,has been on a steady increase. It is of no difficulty for ys to come up with some factors responsible for these changes.At the top of the list,it is with the rapid development of economy that common inhabitants can make better porfit consequently,they can afford the once expensive necessities such as milk and meet.In addition,more and more civilians come to recognize the importanceof a balanced diet in which milk and meat are indispensable.Finally,the booming manufacture industry has made the adequate supply of various food products possible,which promotes the popularity of milk and meat. Taking into consideration what has been discussed so far,we are very glad to see that this phenomenon indicates the better-off living standards of the rank and file.But on the other hand,eating too much high-energy food will lead to some diseases.Therefore,we should attach much importance to the balance of diet in our daily life.