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2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:37浏览次数:9555
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题目 My views on Online Shopping
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1. 现在网购已经成为一种时尚  
2. 网上购物有很多好处,但也有不少问题 
3. 我的建议 
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With the development of economy, online shopping has become a fashion. All kinds of things can be purchased from the Internet. Of course, online shopping has many advantages. For example, online shopping can buy things from all over the country or even the world, and can buy the desired products at home, and they are all delivered home, which is very convenient. But there are also many problems in online shopping, such as express delivery. Many people like to buy home appliances online because they are cheap but can't avoid bumping in the process of transportation, so they are willing to use them when they get home. The development of online shopping is so fast that many fake and inferior goods come out one after another. There is no guarantee. And because the online things are relatively cheap will also increase people's desire to buy, so it is likely to cause the phenomenon of blind consumption. Although online shopping brings people a lot of super convenience, it also brings many hidden dangers. I suggest that we should moderate consumption, avoid blind obedience and rational consumption.

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